trip to Spencer Park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
• A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

“THE TRIP TO SPENCER PARK”

It was March, Friday the 10th, Ako Ngatahi went to Spencer Park to have fun learning and exploring outdoors it’s like EOTC week , we’re so excited to go to Spencer Park, we ride a bus and I’m sitting with Jolly-Rose and we’re looking outside the window, we see some constructions, building and some houses while waiting.

We need to go to our group first, Jolly-Rose and I got the 3rd letter E group. First we went to the playground to go play and we went to the red string tower, secondly we went to the lagoon to do some exercise while we wait to explore , we saw spiderwebs all over the place and while we waiting a horse rider walk past us and say “hello” and we learnt about a beautiful white bird on the lagoon called “white ibis”.

We ate our morning tea, we went into the big bushes so we can go to the beach to look for some sea treasure like some sticks and shells to use to make a sculpture. While we’re walking back to the hut we saw some cool big trees (woah!) it was amazing

I only found 8 sea treasures but that’ll work, after that we went back to the hut to ate our lunch because we’re of walking and exploring , our group didn’t finished eating our lunch because it’s time to go back to the school.  Lastly but not least, and some people give us some fruits, but I choose apple and after exploring to the Spencer Park, we’re all ready to go back to the school to have some conversations with the things that we haven’t seen before and to think an idea that we could do to our sea treasures that we found.