W.A.L.T write a story about the cloud, THE DIFFERENT CLOUD

>>W.A.L.T write a story about the cloud<<

I have here is a google drawing about my story and my story is about the cloud.
What I've done good is my writing and the background of my writing.
Last week we've been learning the cloud and we have to make a writing about the cloud.
I've put some metaphors too, "what is a metaphor" if you peeps are wondering,

A metaphor is a figure of an speech in a word or a phrase which is applied to an object or an action which is not literally appropriate/applicable.
I enjoyed writing stories especially the mystery ones and the fantasy ones too.
>>HOPE YA'LL LIKE IT!<<
>>ENJOY<<