It was 6:51 am, the ocean sparked like a glitter,
A group of vicious pirate took over our ship,
I was shocked, frozen, nervous, I don't know what to do, they want our ship, I don't know why they want our ship. The leader of the group of vicious pirates wanted the key from me, he said “GIVE ME THE KEYS!…”, I was frozen like a statue, then he repeated what he said but with more calmed voice... “give me the key…”, I gave him the keys and he said “I’m the captain now” .
The other pirates were eager to opened the container but there was nothing inside, then the group of robots came out of the containers, it was like a surprise.
The pirates were frozen and shocked while their mouth were opened,
they turned around and saw the robots,
All the robots scared the pirates away by saying “boo!” then all the pirates panicked and ran away like a chicken , all the robots wanted the pirates to beg for our forgiveness.
The robot gave the key to me and we thanked them for their braveness…...
“The end”
Hi Skyler. You done a really good job about your Samolia writing. But maybe next time you can put facts at the top. Maybe you can edit it and fix some of them like put some W.A.L.T.
ReplyDeleteHello Joshua thanks for commenting on my blog, I really appreciate it, Next time I'll put some walt, but thanks for commenting though, have a great day bye.
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ReplyDeleteCool story Skyler, I really like the part when you said " The ocean sparkled like glitter.", I think next time you should say something about the story so people know what your doing. Maybe you should also proof reading your story because after "glitter," you put a comma and just right after I saw a capital letter and I thought it should have been a lower case. But anyways great story!
ReplyDeleteHI Lyan. Thanks for commenting on my blog, I really appreciate it, Have a great day, bye.
DeleteHi Skyler it Micheala I like your writing it makes sense very well, it made me feel like a was on the boat to. I really like your writing Skyler
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting on my blog Michaela, I really appreciate it anyway have a great day, bye.
DeleteWhat's up Skyler!
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post nice job, i like what you said 'I was frozen like a statue',and I saw your comma but anyways great story have a nice day bye.
Thanks for commenting on my blog Lhysette, I really appreciate it, have a great day bye.
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