The Piano

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• Re-call what is happening in the video.
• Use adjectives and experiment with language features.
• Use paragraphs correctly.
• Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence starters.

Indicators

• uses oral, written, and visual language features to create meaning and effect;
• uses a large and increasing bank of high-frequency, topic specific, and personal-content words to create meaning;
• spells most high-frequency words correctly and shows growing knowledge of common spelling patterns;
• uses a range of strategies to self-monitor and self-correct spelling;
• gains increasing control of text conventions, including some grammatical conventions.

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“The Piano”

There was a wretched grandpa playing the grand piano, he played the piano like he was sorrow but the tone seems from his heart, he started playing an emotional and unhappy song, it was blue but he kept on smiling to cover up the pain from his heart.

Suddenly a ghost faded in, she touched the grandpa’s hands, he felt the cold and smooth touched him, it was the sweetest grandma, the grandpa’s wife.

They played the piano together like it was a duet, the grandma kissed the grandpa on his cheek, it was like a remembrance, a remembrance to remember their unforgettable, kind-hearted, thoughtful, and immortality love.

The grandpa felt the cold lips that touched his cheek, he started playing the piano more faster but then the tone changed, the tone was like a gleeful song, he remembered the war, all the soldiers were shooting, fighting for their love, life and sake.

He also remembered when his friend got shot by a vicious enemy and died slowly.

He kept playing the piano after that he remembered something cool happened when he was a kid, his father gave him a special gift when it was his birthday, the gift was a horse head toy, it was the gift he wanted since he was 5. He passed the toy to his grandson,  after his  grandson finished riding the toy, he joined his grandpa finish the song and they both looked at each other and smiled gladly……..

“The End”