I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Skyler, I couldn't understand what you were saying but I get the point. Also you're deleting the words that you wrote which is a bit bad because most of the audience would be confuse. Yet you can fix that by redoing the video and maybe even improving it. Lastly your voice is not clear, while there are a lot of background noise.
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Hey Skyler,
ReplyDeleteI couldn't understand what you were saying but I get the point. Also you're deleting the words that you wrote which is a bit bad because most of the audience would be confuse. Yet you can fix that by redoing the video and maybe even improving it. Lastly your voice is not clear, while there are a lot of background noise.
hi Skyler this is Allaih I like your DLO but I not understand your DLO and you have wrong in your DLO a little bit but I like it it's good. bye
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