My Space chimp

This my space chimp and I hope you enjoy reading it and like this thank you

W.A.L.T write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.

Include a twist to add interest

5,4,3,2,1 blast off,1961 the day i was blast off by Mark to sent me into the space

I felt a little scared cause i was alone. Then Mark put a photo of me and Mark.

65 years later

I woke up and i saw many things like stars and it was beautiful.  I saw a

planet and i was already know what it was.  I am feeling scared cause i was alone. And when i was asleep It was my last day spending my time with Mark and when I was there i see our home.  I saw many old buildings,i saw trees that die in there too and abandon house too and I am feeling upset that Mark left me.

And the important thing is I am in our planet Earth and I was amazed that what I saw.  Then that was  I saw when I was land there.  And then I was feeling a little frightened and I am thinking that i have a new life waiting for me. I will  wait them to rescue me from here,so even that I was afraid I will fight. Then I saw a chimp and

The chimp said

“Hide! Hide! hide!” I said “why?”

“He’s coming!”

“But who?”

“Him! Him! Him!”

“who?”

“The evil chimp!”

“Go hide!”                                                                                

“huh?!”

“Yes!,yes!,yes,!”

“Ohhhhh ok”

“But where?”

“Over there!”

So I said “let’s go!”

So we run,run,run and run until we reach the hiding spot

“Hmmm?”

“Now we are here so, what are we going to do now?”(oo aah)

“Let’s find some food!”

So we find some leftover foods in a abandon house

And we eat and eat (crunching)

(crumb,crumb,crumb)

After we ate

We sleep (zzzzz)(snoring)

Then we hear a neigh from a horse I see the evil chimp riding a horse ”neigh!”

I think that they saw us running

“Wake up,wake up”(whispering)

“We better hide””they’re here”

The chimp said “ok”(oo aah)

so we sneak around and

Then the chimp step a dried leaf (chick)

“Oops,o oh”

The evil chimp:who’s that?

Go! Go! Hide! So we hide

And they capture us we are on the jail,the

princess saw us and i think she is upset that we are going to die

So she helped us “go! Run!”

So we run and I punch the guards and get there armors we pretend that we are

Guards so we run,run,run, then the evil chimp said “where are you going,you too?!”

And I said”we are just going for a break”

The evil chimp said “ok,but you need to be fast”

So I said “thank you your majesty”

So we run and hide

The chimp said “I’m thirsty”and I said “me too”

So we’ve seen a lake from the side of the castle and we drunk

And after we drink some water we continue running

And we don’t know where are we now and we’ve seen a hips of chimps they’re billion of them

So I’ve an idea my idea is we are going to fight the evil chimps and the hips of chimps are our

Army so we all walk and finally! We’re here so I said” attack!”(ching)

And after an hour we won I can’t believe we won,so we are going to back in a forest.

5 years later

We’ve seen a hips of space ships landing here and I think it’s Mark!

So I can’t believe Mark his here and the door opened (whooosh)

Mark said”Philip”

I said “Mark”(oo aah)..............And we lived happily ever after

THE END